“Vision is broken” is a free-form poem about all the hard times that can take away our passion for life. These hard times make it hard for us to go after changes and reduce our will to dream.
Sometimes love, sympathy, and support are not enough to change a bad situation and make things right. Sometimes no matter how much we want to it is hard to keep on dreaming. And, even if we truly want to dream what we see is not clear. The vision we once had might now be broken.
Glorious sun, While the wind is all frozen. Two kittens hug each other. Their eyes are blinded, And their breathing is hard. Thoughts keep on wondering But my vision is broken.
If you liked this you may also like “Silence” or “Faded image”
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26 thoughts on “Vision is Broken”
Very nice x
Thank you ❣️
I feel like I’m going through this with my vision of some dreams I had — really well written!
Thank you Molly!
You’ve captured both warmth and sadness at the same time in this poem. <3
Thank you Nicole!
Thank you Jodie 🙂
I enjoyed reading your poem. Going through difficulty, there is something about receiving genuine love, encouragement and care. Thank you for sharing this.
Thank you Natalie 😊
This is beautiful Eri! Keep on sharing your poetry, I can’t wait to read more x
Thank you Vourneen ❤️
This poem is so sweet.
Thank you Jamie!
Beautiful poem, well done
Thank you Rayo!
Amazing poem, I would love to read more of your poetry. The use of words is just amaing! Thank you for sharing it!
Thank you Frank 💓
The last stanza reminds me of how I felt prior to starting my website when i felt really down and burnt out from work. I kept trying to think of any way possible to get out of what I was doing but nothing felt tangible or possible. Now, I still feel burnt out but at least I have my website to look forward to!
I can understand what you went through Paul. I had a similar experience in the past also. Your website is your creation and getting tired to work on it cannot be compared to getting a burn out for anyone else. You do a great job! Thank you for reading and commenting 🙂
This was beautiful and made my heart break a bit.
Thank you lovely 💜